Wow.
There are so many things that irritate me about this that I'm having trouble figuring out where to start. I guess I'll just go and keep going until I run out of peeves.
1. It is a copy. Just because you add a few unnecessary characters and loudly proclaim that it isn't a copy doesn't make it so. Even if your story itself does not copy SMBZ, there are still too many similarities to simply write off. Everything that you are proposing here has been done before. A LOT. You are not the first smbz fan to show up and make a "different" smbz.
You won't be the last, either.
2. It's a trailer for a copy of a fan-series. That's a triple-whammy. If you're going to make a movie, then make a movie. Don't waste everyone's time with a trailer.
3. Don't put music in your preloader. That's why you had that white screen at the start. In fact, that music track was probably the biggest part of your 9.4 MB file size. That basically means that your music, which was evidently supposed to make the loading time less tedious, made it EVEN MORE lengthy and tedious.
4. This pisses me off the most and it's the reason why you get a zero from me:
"I personally give myself a 3.6 because this is alot better than alot of crap on newgrounds."
"yep this is my other profile"
Your hubris is overwhelming. Not only do you dare to announce what you think you're worth scorewise in your description, you actually stoop to reviewing your own work with an alt account. Disgusting.
That's enough. I'm done with you.
R1665